Well, this is the last chapter I have so far. Hopefully the author will update soon. Untill then I have other fics waiting to be destroyed.
Anyway, the fic features: general stupidity, Mary-Sueness, a trite plot, a lack of originality, Sirius behaving like a five-year old, the first signs of Snape's attraction to the Sue (Poor Snape), and more
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